2008/05/10

Tamana Essay


How would you like to visit to Tamana?
In this essay, I'm going to write about
Tamana
city in Kumamoto. Do you know where Tamana is in
Kumamoto prefecture?Tamana city is close to
Kumamoto city, but it is more northwest than
Kumamoto and near to Ariake sea.                                                                                                                  
1.Hot Spring - Tamana is famous for its hot spring.
Firstly, I'm going to write about hot spring in Tamana.
There're about 20 Japanese-style hotels at Onsen Street in Tamana.

It was discovered approximately 1300 years ago. Its warm water is
week alkaline and you'll get smooth skin from it. In addition, it's good
for rheumatism and neuralgia.
One of the most I'd like to show you is ''Shirasagi Ashiyu'' in Ryuuganshi Park.
As you can see, it is a hot spring for just only your feet and there is large and clean.
The temperature is 41℃ , and there is so large that many people soak in there.
Also, you can enjoy for free!
2.Chinese noodle - Tamana is famous for its Chinese noodles.
Secondly, I'm going to write about ramen in Tamana.
In Tamana, there's approximately 26 ramen restraunts; Touen 桃苑,Sennryuu千龍,Tairin大輪 and so on. Ramen in Tamana is made withrich tonkotu soup with burned garlic. Its soup is made bystewing pig skeleton
for a long time. Also, typically its noodle is mudium-fine. They're different
from Kumamoto ramen.

3.events- Tamana has a lot of events every season. Lastly, I'm going to write about events. Mainly, I'd like to introduce 3 events.
In spring; Hanashoubu festival from May 24th to May 14th - 66000 hanashoubu blossoms are at their best during the event and120 flag of an arrow wave bravely. They're illuminated at night until 10:00. Also,we can experience various things like cooking sweets, oshibana or something during it.
In summer; Firework display in August- Surprisingly there's displayed fireworks 9900 times! This is the most times in Kumamoto one, so many people come there for it. We can watch in Takase bridge.
In fall in the Autumn Equinox Day ; oodawarakoragashi'' - as you can see, we compete rolling ''oodawara'' with the team , and oodawara means big straw bag which is 2.5 m in diameter, 4 m in width and 800 kg in weight! Also, we can enjoy concert and fireworks.



In conclusion, Tamana is worth visiting though it is country.
Tamana is healing city, because there are a lot of kinds hot springs,
so we can soak in for our health. Also, we can eat traditional Tamana ramen.
Tamana is warm city, because people cherish traditional events.
How would you like to visit Tamana if you're tired with your business or something. You'll get away from your stress. [459words]

2 件のコメント:

Rick さんのコメント...

This is very good for an essay prep post. When you post the essay, please pay attention to the following points:

> Do you know where is Tamana
this is an indirect question (kansetsu gimonbun)

> close to Kumamoto city but, it is more northwest
move the comma before "but"

> approxmately, week, tipically, somethig, bissines
check spelling

> famous for its Chinese noodle
only 1 noodle?

Rick さんのコメント...

> Tairinn
たいりんん

Is this correct?